Not *too* bad, in fact. You might want to make Z a little thicker. And smoothen the explosion graphics like you did with the fog, because it doesn't look right the way it is.
Not *too* bad, in fact. You might want to make Z a little thicker. And smoothen the explosion graphics like you did with the fog, because it doesn't look right the way it is.
That's what The Meow was doing half of his childhood. Well, without really animating the sequence.
The paper-ish style is great, but there's too much commotion in some static backgrounds.
The Meow is totally voting for a whole series and could even probably lend a hand.
What's a lead pencil though?
Yeah, the backgrounds are a huge pain when I animate, and a little help would actually go a long way for me. If we can work something out, I'd be down!
And a lead pencil is my most trusted companion when making these animations. I don't usually stick with regular pencils.
The visual presentation is good, the voiceover is odd, the idea is nice, the end is weird.
Funny graphics. Nice voice control. Amusing plot.
Strange black stains running around. The animation is a little too rough.
RIP automatized translations.
Doesn't this make it a cuppy?
damnt. thats actually very clever!
You should also have gone for a softer voiceover...
There was an editing frame visible around the flopping character at the end of part 4. Not sure if it's intended. The whole thing is very funny, even though I don't really know the memes.
It was on purpose, but almost all the jokes were invented by me xD
Cute. But shouldn't the bubble grow on exhale rather than inhale?
Calm flair-type unit. Very adaptable.
Open for English><Russian translation and editing requests and drawing collaborations.
Occasionally attempt to compose music too.
Age 32, Male
Artist, Translator
HLG23
Vladimir, Russia
Joined on 1/12/12