Not *too* bad, in fact. You might want to make Z a little thicker. And smoothen the explosion graphics like you did with the fog, because it doesn't look right the way it is.

That's what The Meow was doing half of his childhood. Well, without really animating the sequence.
The paper-ish style is great, but there's too much commotion in some static backgrounds.
The Meow is totally voting for a whole series and could even probably lend a hand.
What's a lead pencil though?

The visual presentation is good, the voiceover is odd, the idea is nice, the end is weird.

Looks nice. The collision animation and mechanics are neat but sometimes they play weird. The decorations look good, and the daytime and weather mechanic is nice. The enemies and fighting mechanics are yet rather unclear. And you should consider revising the sound part maybe, not sure if it's due to the game being an alphabeta or because of some issues. The hints should be bigger and more convenient for reading, for now it requires some additional eyesight load.
The Meow also found a weird thing that we can discuss if you care sending him a private message.

(This has been edited. The Meow apologizes for any inconvenience the initial text may have caused.)
One of the emblems of a chest riddle is horizontally mirrored, either in the riddle or where the clue is.
The game is neat and enjoyable. The Meow also likes the square-ish models here a lot. The music is beautiful and quite comforting in a way.

Some parts of the description can be quite confusing due to incorrect word usage. However, the idea is clear. And you shouldn't repeat similar names so many times The picture is cute.

This is quite an invigorating one.
Cheers to music references.
Is it snowing on the right?

Not impressed, like at all. But the work in itself is great.